Things Fall Apart: Real Talk

OK, folks, I hate to do this two weeks in a row, but here's some real talk.

I wrote this week's chapter.

I don't like it very much.

Now, keep in mind, I am not one of those writers who always dislikes what he wrote after he wrote it. Actually, I'm pretty pleased by most of the story so far—and I just reread the whole thing to help me get some pieces straight (and recognized along the way I have some pieces to straighten out when I start putting together the omnibus).

But this chapter, I woke up this morning and just decided it didn't work very well, and my beta reader's notes were not what was going to fix it, by themselves.

So, back to the drawing board, hopefully still getting something out TODAY, but since it's already after the usual posting time, obviously not on time.

"Art is imperfect!" – C. Lauper, Target Center, 4 December 2024 CE.